SUMMER VIBE
In the summer, My friends and I had the idea to go on a trip during the summer. So we agreed to go to Hua-Hin. We therefore plan. We reservation in advance. This trip we 1 night 2 days. On the day we go, we met at Silpakorn University. when I meet my friends, I miss my friends very much because I have not seen each other since graduate high school.
During our stay in the car, I felt excited to go out together. We invite each other to talk about the possibility of life when we don't live together.
We arrived Hua-Hin. The first thing we did is went to the seaside but the air was very hot. So ate and bought seafood at market and then went to the lodge to rested and prepared for the party in the evening. At the lodge, when we rested is therefore prepared food and place to party around the pool, I felt very happy to stay here.
After the party, we went to the Cicada, I'm not surprised that many people want to come here because this is a very interesting. There are much handmade but it's very expensive. Not only of handmade, there are various performances such as spit fire and dance B-Boy. Then we came back to lodge and slept.
In the morning, we checked out and ate at the restaurant. We went to Seen Space in here we took photos and swum. Finally, we bought souvenirs at Maekimlai and came back to home to miss each other.
- Myself and My friends.
What did the story happen?
- My friends and I went to Hua-Hin.
When did the story happen?
- On last summer.
Where did the story happen?
- It happened at Hua-Hin.
How did it happen?
- We went to Hua-Hin.
- We ate and bought seafood at the market.
- We went to lodge to relax
- We prepared a pool party.
- We went to Cicada.
- We went to Seen Space.
- We bought souvenirs.
How did the story end?
- We came back to home with miss each other.
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