Smile of each other
This is the picture of a French
father and his son. The son is riding and running at the beach.
The father is 38 years old who wears
a white T-shirt and has short black hair. He has a wrinkles and a beard. He is
an engineer. He worked very hard, but at the same time he takes care of his son
non-defective. Although sometimes he is tired, when he comes back home, he
always smiles to his son because the son is his happiness.
The son is 4 years old who wears a
white T-shirt and has long curly hair. He has black eyes like his father. He is
cheerful and kind. He is a strong child, not a fussy. When father sent him to
school, he smiles back to his father and runs to play with his friends.
Every evening, they will have dinner
together at home and find activities to do at home to build a father
relationship. On weekend, he usually takes his son to the place where his son
wants to go.

your story is very interesting you score 10 point.
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ตอบลบit's easy to understand .Your writing is good but this story is short . score is 8 points
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